http://www.mypraize.com/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=63320 Hey, wanted some opionions. Would any of you guys care to read something like this story?? It's my first draft, and a little rough (I'm going back and re-writing), but what do you guys think of the story line thus far?? Again, I know it's rough, but I would really appreciate input!! Thanks!!! :cheer: