i'm writing a book but i only have a few pages done and i want to know what you think. and i'm sorry i have trouble spelling Those red eyes staired at her with hatered seeming to seep out of them he finally moved grabing for his weapon she searched for a few seconds. The chain to her chain claw was just a few feet away. she jumped as one of his hammers crushed the ground behind her with a sickening thud and the ground mouned as if in pain. he through his other hammer at her but she had already grabbed her chain claws and crossed them over her chest as the hammer coileded with them the power of the blow was to great it was going to kill her on impacked. it coileded Aubry awoke with a start her heart racing and drenched in a cold sweat, what did this dream mean? she had been having this dream since they moved into this house two weeks ago. She quickly wrote down what she could remember from her fleeting dream in a journal that she started when she tried to explain her dreams to her mother only to find she could not remember them. She put the journal down now feeling as if she had been awake for many hours she staired at the clock as it read 7:30 she decided to get up before she was rudely woken up by her brothers. she lightly tip-toed down to the kitchen where she started to prepare break fast for her family. She could hear footsteps thundering down the stairs not looking up from diecing the tomatos for the omlets she said you two really should be more quiet or you'll wake everyone up. To late her dad called as he came down the stairs followed by mom, andros, marny and kairi. Don't you ever get tired of telling us that i mean if we haven't listened to you yet what makes you think we'll start now. Skyler said in a provoking way. False hope i guess i was hoping you were ready to grow a brain. Okay i can see where this is headed so let's just stop right now we are all to tired for this. Aubry keep working on those tomatos. Skyler crack the eggs for the omlets, Marny start the bacon, Conin set the table and pour everyone a drink, Andros make the toast, Kairi and Cona help Aubry with slicing and diecing and i will cook the omlets. Oh i love it when you take charge Cona said as he kissed her lightly on the lips they heared a resounding eeeyew from Skyler and Conin Hey you two better get used to that cause in a few years your gonna want to kiss girls. Anros said with a simerk on his face. Conin and Skyler looked at each other with discust and disbelife "No way not going to happen" conin said quickly. Aubry rolled her eyes still diecing the tomatos "So what are we going to do today your mom and i have the day off and you guy's only have a week left of summer vacation. So i suggest we take a picnic to the beach. what do you say" by their reaction it was aparent he didn't need to ask. "Cool, Awsome was the replie as they jumped up and down they had been living in texas for two weeks and they had not been to the beach yet. "Alright lets eat pack up and head to the beach" at that announcement the work of prepareing breakfast started to go by faster. Two hours later they started the trek to the beach.

Did you get inspired by Kindom Hearts?? Oh, it's a good story, but a little hard to read. Quotation marks might help.

yeah i liked the name kairi